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1 change: 1 addition & 0 deletions Web-Expensify
Submodule Web-Expensify added at 2a25b4
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Expand Up @@ -13,6 +13,8 @@ After you're assigned the Travel Arranger role, you can arrange travel for anoth

Tap the **➕ Create** button at the bottom of your screen, then choose **Book travel**.

You can also select **Search** (the magnifying glass icon), type **Book travel**, then select the **Book travel** result. **Book travel** appears in both places only when Expensify Travel is enabled on your active workspace.

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Readability: This sentence is hard to scan — it repeats Book travel three times in one sentence and packs a search flow plus a conditional into a single line. Consider splitting into a short step and a separate conditional sentence, e.g. "Or select Search (the magnifying glass icon), type Book travel, then select the Book travel result." followed by a separate note that this option only appears when Expensify Travel is enabled on your active workspace.


If you don’t see **Book travel**, ask a Workspace Admin to [enable Expensify Travel](https://help.expensify.com/articles/travel/company-setup/Enable-Travel-on-a-Workspace) on the workspace.

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2 changes: 2 additions & 0 deletions docs/articles/travel/booking-travel/Book-Rail-Travel.md
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Expand Up @@ -12,6 +12,8 @@ Book train tickets directly in Expensify Travel. This guide covers how to search

Tap the **➕ Create** button at the bottom of your screen, then choose **Book travel**.

You can also select **Search** (the magnifying glass icon), type **Book travel**, then select the **Book travel** result. **Book travel** appears in both places only when Expensify Travel is enabled on your active workspace.

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Readability: The sentence repeats Book travel three times and combines a search-based navigation flow with a conditional in one line, hurting scannability. Split the search flow and the availability condition into two shorter sentences.

If you don’t see **Book travel**, ask a Workspace Admin to [enable Expensify Travel](https://help.expensify.com/articles/travel/company-setup/Enable-Travel-on-a-Workspace) on the workspace.

# How to book rail travel
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Expand Up @@ -13,6 +13,8 @@ Any member with guest booking permission can book travel for someone who doesn

Tap the **➕ Create** button at the bottom of your screen, then choose **Book travel**.

You can also select **Search** (the magnifying glass icon), type **Book travel**, then select the **Book travel** result. **Book travel** appears in both places only when Expensify Travel is enabled on your active workspace.

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Readability: The sentence repeats Book travel three times and merges a search flow with an availability condition in one line, hurting scannability. Split the search-based navigation and the condition into two shorter sentences.


If you don’t see **Book travel**, ask a Workspace Admin to [enable Expensify Travel](https://help.expensify.com/articles/travel/company-setup/Enable-Travel-on-a-Workspace) on the workspace.

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Expand Up @@ -13,6 +13,8 @@ Book flights easily with Expensify Travel. This guide walks you through finding

Tap the **➕ Create** button at the bottom of your screen, then choose **Book travel**.

You can also select **Search** (the magnifying glass icon), type **Book travel**, then select the **Book travel** result. **Book travel** appears in both places only when Expensify Travel is enabled on your active workspace.

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Readability: The sentence repeats Book travel three times and combines a search flow with a conditional in one line, reducing scannability. Split the search-based navigation and the availability condition into two shorter sentences.


If you don’t see **Book travel**, ask a Workspace Admin to [enable Expensify Travel](https://help.expensify.com/articles/travel/company-setup/Enable-Travel-on-a-Workspace) on the workspace.

# How to book a flight
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Expand Up @@ -12,6 +12,8 @@ Book hotels easily with Expensify Travel. This guide covers how to search for ho

Tap the **➕ Create** button at the bottom of your screen, then choose **Book travel**.

You can also select **Search** (the magnifying glass icon), type **Book travel**, then select the **Book travel** result. **Book travel** appears in both places only when Expensify Travel is enabled on your active workspace.

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Readability: The sentence repeats Book travel three times and merges a search flow with an availability condition in one line, hurting scannability. Split the search-based navigation and the condition into two shorter sentences.

If you don’t see **Book travel**, ask a Workspace Admin to [enable Expensify Travel](https://help.expensify.com/articles/travel/company-setup/Enable-Travel-on-a-Workspace) on the workspace.

# How to book a hotel
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Tap the **➕ Create** button at the bottom of your screen, then choose **Book travel**.

You can also select **Search** (the magnifying glass icon), type **Book travel**, then select the **Book travel** result. **Book travel** appears in both places only when Expensify Travel is enabled on your active workspace.

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Readability: The sentence repeats Book travel three times and combines a search flow with a conditional in one line, reducing scannability. Split the search-based navigation and the availability condition into two shorter sentences.

If you don’t see **Book travel**, ask a Workspace Admin to [enable Expensify Travel](https://help.expensify.com/articles/travel/company-setup/Enable-Travel-on-a-Workspace) on the workspace.

# How to book a rental car
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